Fiction 101

City Beat’s Fiction 101 contest just posted it’s winners for 2011. Again not a winner, but not disheartened or concerned. My submissions were so-so at best this year, as I have been preoccupied with about twenty other things. At any rate, I thought I should give them the chance to see the light of day. So here they are for your viewing and critique.

Neighborhood Watch

Old man Murphy meticulously reread the notice found tacked to his front.

Dear Neighbor,
By now you must be aware of the problem our neighborhood is having with vandalism. Youth have targeted our community as a practical joke. We cannot let them get the best of us. Please inform the authorities immediately if you see anything. Together, we can put an end to this problem.

Regards,
John Moore
President, Homeowners Association

After scanning the letter one more time, he unceremoniously grabbed a new pack of toilet paper and headed towards John Moore’s house, chuckling softly to himself.

I love the thought of a crotchety old man going out to vandalize his stuffy neighbor’s home with a teenage style vendetta.

Cravings
Trying to work, her head felt fuzzy, her brain processes stifled. She imagined possible causes: the flu, start of her period, or a hang-over from what? After a couple hours, her stomach grumbled, but the only thing that sounded good was liver. “What?” she asked herself, “that’s ridiculous.” She finally settled on a steak burrito and diet coke. Unsatisfied and a little crazed, she decided to leave work. Heading home, her mouth watered for brains. Sitting there waiting was her new kitten who she faintly remembered pawing her head as she slept. “Damn,” she thought, “Who’s my little zombie cat?”

This story came to me within 20 minutes of my kitten gnawing on my head and the subsequent headache I had. Related or pure coincidence?

Am Writing

The bug has bite me and my husband has just gone with it. I’m six days and 10,266 words into a novel I hinted at over a month ago. I know very few people actually believe it until they see it, neither do I for that matter. But this feels different than all other projects I have started and then put down. There is no magical day like an event that approaches then passes whether you chose to do anything or not. I decided to use the NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) to forage ahead and actually write a novel that has been on my brain for half a year. And after having a fifth of it down on paper, I feel like this is actually doable.

For those who are curious and haven’t yet asked, I’m writing a historical fiction novel on the 1935 California Pacific Exposition in Balboa Park, specifically on the nudest colony, Zoro Gardens. “Nudests?” you say.  Yes, there were naked people living (well, sort of) in Balboa Park for two years in the small canyon between the Reuben H. Fleet and the Casa de Balboa (where the San Diego History Center, Model Railroad Museum and MoPA reside). There was a lot of interesting thing going on at that time as well.

So with that I leave you because the 267 words I just typed here, stalled me the same number of words I could have written towards that novel. So wish me luck and we’ll hang in December, or when my eyes are fried from staring at the computer for so long.

Short Story Review: Kuro Crow

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Travel through the words, through the mind of Dave Maass to the Far East, through Korea and Japan where things happened, perhaps only in his mind. They were interesting things and only took up a few pages. The symbolism of the crow might be revealed and someone might die, but they might not. Reading Kuro Crow for yourself is the only way to truly find out.

Occupy This! – Protest music to fuel your fire

Voices are making themselves heard all over the country by taking to the streets representing the 99%. Some voices can be heard louder than others but the collective voice remains the loudest. One voice heard this weekend over a small, strained amplifier at Occupy SD, was that of local musician, Kevin Martin.

“I’m sorry, but I refuse to believe this is all we’re meant to be,” Kevin’s scratchy sounding voice sang out the purpose of the gathering through his newest solo song, “TV News.” Millions of Americans sit at home mesmerized by the illuminated screen every day, soaking the content presented to them, accepting it all as “the truth.” Kevin broke out of the screen’s grip and wrote with his heart.

After talking to Kevin, of local pop band Get Back Loretta, his ignited passion and involvement with the Occupy Wall Street movement may light a fire in you.

“Music has a great capacity to inspire people,” Kevin explains. “I really want to empower people to stand up for what they believe in and be fearless while doing so.” He shared one of his favorite quotes, by Albert Einstein, that prompted him to take action, “The world will not be destroyed by those who do evil, but by those who watch them without doing anything.”

He continued by saying, “Protesting is great, but at the end of the day we need to get involved with our local government and vote. Our real power is going to come from exercising our democratic right to vote.”

Kevin sings about hope in “TV News,” but what sorts of hopes does he have for the current Occupy Wall Street movement and how does he think that will be manifested?

“I feel there is a great awakening happening right now. My hope is that in 2012 there will be a paradigm shift, meaning our old mold will be broken and we will embark in a new direction of consciousness, more unified and less driven by greed. This movement is a good example that we are headed in that direction.”

The Occupy Wall Street movement was the first cause Kevin has felt compelled to write about. The media disconnect from reality hit him hard, but the effects on his friends’ lives hit him harder.

“I never thought I’d write music for a cause or get involved in politics. I’m not sure if this is my purpose, but I do know that it feels really good to follow your instincts and intuition, and that’s what I’m doing right now. I want to keep a positive message out there, but also inspire people to get involved and make change in their communities.”

Kevin has hope, not only hope for a new direction in our country, but a positive outlook for the way he writes music. “Hopefully one day I won’t have to write songs like this, and I will be writing songs about how far the world has come and how much love and respect is in the world.”

San Diego Veg Week reflections

Last week I participated in San Diego Veg Week. No, not the vegging you do around the house… lying on the couch for a week watching movies; although, that sounds awesome. The kind of veg week we are talking involves a lifestyle change in eating habits for just 7 days.

The “veg pledge,” as it has be fondly referred to, finished it’s 3rd year with over 1,600 participants, up from 700 in 2010. When you sign up you indicate your veg pledge level, your current veg level and what issues prompted your pledge. I consider myself to be partly vegetarian already (eating only a little meat, cheese, eggs per week) and committed to the week as a vegetarian, with a personal pledge to attempt to eat at least 50% vegan.

“Vegan?” you say, “That’s hard.” Well that is what I set out to understand. How hard is it really? For me, an ordinary vegetarian lifestyle that includes dairy, eggs, and animal by-products, seemed easy. Often people who attempt a meatless diet fall back on cheese and dairy. Subtract the dairy, egg, honey and other animal by-products and most people freak out. I’m hear to tell you my story.

My personal concerns around attempting this diet were both for health benefits and environmental concerns. Animal cruelty is sad, and I know it happens. I haven’t seen Food, Inc., but I get it. I feel like taking on veganism by addressing concerns about the environment saves two birds by holding back one stone. It is statistics such as the following that tug at my heart and gut in imagining the future for my son:

This stuff terrifies me and I know that global change must come from more than an individual, but I still feel that a little change is better than none.

So with these notions in mind, I set out to be immersed in a culture for a week that included everything from entertaining sideways glances of intolerance to secret looks of approval, and self-education to sharing results with others. Here are a few highlights about my experience:

  • Whole foods, not the store, are the life blood of a vegan. Knowing what goes into your food and eliminating the varieties of chemical compounds that make up many foods is something I can get behind.
  • Avocado is essential for vegan sushi. I love me some sushi but I think I just love avocado, the salty goodness of soy sauce and seaweed salad more than the fish.
  • Uncle Eddie’s Vegan Cookies. The chocolate chip variety are my favorite. Yum!
  • Larabars. Made of only unsweetened fruits, nuts and spices. Each flavor contains no more than nine ingredients. Simple and so good.
  • It’s possible to take veganism to the extreme by eliminating animal by-products used in the process of creating food. Some examples I found, you wouldn’t be able to eat at all unless you made the food yourself.
  • Barnivore, an awesome vegan drinking resource. Its fairly comprehensive listings include whether a brewery/company is vegan friendly or has some options for vegans.
  • Resources galore are available for anyone attempting to try this lifestyle change. Here are some that I enjoyed: VegWeb, Choose Veg and Veg San Diego

Now that the official San Diego Veg Week is done, my husband asks, “What are you going to do now?” And my response is that I will do what feels right. Everybody’s body is different. To me, the diet change was cleansing and gave me energy, but others, I heard were rolling on the floor in hunger. Meat and dairy sit heavily in my stomach while nuts and plants seem to be the right fill. I will try to maintain a fairly vegetarian (even vegan diet) with the occasional meat or cheese thrown in there. I feel it is the best I can do for myself and the environment we live in.